"You do know that I am not in love with you right," he looked at the face that was smugly settled on his chest.He could not believe that he still has not fallen in love with the girl who is lying by his side, the greatest person he has known so far.
"I know," she came out of her own reverie and looked up at him. "I will wait for you to fall in love with me someday, soon." He could not stand the love in those eyes, for he did not know how to reciprocate it. He turned his head so that his eyes were fixed at the oblivion in the ceiling above.
She crawled up to his face, her breath sending sparks of pleasure through his every nerve, something that he has never felt before with anyone.
"Never look away from me," and bit his cheeks, "especially when we are in the middle of a conversation."
He held her tight, as if afraid of losing her, "Did i tell you that you are the most wonderful person I have met?"
"No you have not, but I always knew it, have seen it in your eyes and felt it in your touch," and closed her eyes as she fell into a deep sleep by his side.
He wanted to fall asleep too, but stayed awake, contemplating himself, trying to figure out what in the world was happening to him.
14 comments:
kollamm allo...thudakam
Is it a Sidney Sheldon in the making or is it Erich Segal? Im hoping its the latter.
nice one.. :)
@JPK : Was never a fan of Sheldon books....and have read only Love Story of Segal....so not either...but did get a feedback that the first line is gripping...:)
and fucker i need to meet you....need some briefing for the book...
@anonymous : thanks...
@ manoj : thanks
Dei,
You've been blogrolled.
Cheers,
JPK
www.judeunleashed.blogspot.com
Sometimes it takes us time to realise our feelings and it always wise to share them with the one you trust! Remember, that the one who loves does not keep any condition that u love her back.... Just respect her for that, and allow yourself to experience whatever is happening.. probably love will strike u dear...
All the best :)
your wellwisher...
Ladke! don't you think you should have told me at least! :/
@neha:really sorry sweets....i know....started writing a while ago...been tied up like crazy....job, cat prep and now the book...and then the other stuf...wil call u...
aaha! the theme is superb, n beautifully expressed.. i really hope its nt a real love story of urs :P
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Brilliant!
This one is truly brilliant,has got an Erich Segal touch as someone has rightly said ,go ahead finish it for us . And while you are at it, cut short the narratives and stress more on dialogues:)
read it again after a long time...fresh..in my memories...waiting to read more of it..come on..buckle up! its been a long time since i read something good..waiting for u give me a great read!
even am trying to find time to finish that :(
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